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Post by wannaplayblues on Nov 12, 2014 18:42:32 GMT -6
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Post by jack1982 on Nov 13, 2014 14:34:58 GMT -6
That sounds really nice WPB! About my only little nitpicks would be that the bendy lick in bars five and six could be just a tiny bit smoother, and you've kind of got that staccato thing going on with the fast licks in bars seven and eight. But like I say those are just small nitpicks, overall it sounds very nice and smooth. Good job, that's a really beautiful song!
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Post by Phil on Nov 13, 2014 15:20:13 GMT -6
Nice playing, WPB. Jack already noted the nit-picky things that I might have commented on.
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Post by blackcountrymick on Nov 13, 2014 16:13:02 GMT -6
WPB, that's another one in the bag my friend , thanks for sharing your progress.
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Post by cunningr on Nov 13, 2014 17:02:18 GMT -6
Yeh I agree I listened to this earlier today and enjoyed the recording, good job.
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Post by bluesbruce on Nov 13, 2014 21:24:01 GMT -6
Wannaplay,
Sounding good, man! You played those measures more smoothly in the second chorus. I think a certain "smoothness" just comes with time and playing experience. I don't think it would be worth spending more time on this one - you're definitely ready to move onward!
Bruce
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Post by joachim on Nov 14, 2014 11:11:47 GMT -6
Thumbs up from me as well - you're progressing nicely through BYCU!
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