Minor Blues by Phil

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Minor Blues by Phil Jan 25, 2014 17:57:39 GMT -6

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Post by Phil on Jan 25, 2014 17:57:39 GMT -6

Okay, I bit the bullet and decided to put my head on the chopping block by posting an audio file of me playing. This is "Minor Blues" from BYCU.

I would really appreciate some constructive criticism. Be honest and don't pull any punches. I won't learn if you don't point out my mistakes and the things I need to work on. Being polite and afraid to hurt my feelings will not help me. On the other hand, don't take it too far.

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to comment on this.

Phil

soundcloud.com/jack_e_blue/minor-blues

There's a difference between having 30 years of experience and having 1 year of experience 30 times.

grampalerxst God Posts: 1,272	Minor Blues by Phil Jan 25, 2014 18:37:36 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by grampalerxst on Jan 25, 2014 18:37:36 GMT -6 Wow, that sound good. Nice job!
	The note being played at this moment is the song

TommyD Full Member Posts: 133	Minor Blues by Phil Jan 25, 2014 18:42:12 GMT -6 Phil likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TommyD on Jan 25, 2014 18:42:12 GMT -6 Nicely done! Others here are better qualified to offer a critique, but my thoughts are that you did great.

matonanjin Junior Member Posts: 55	Minor Blues by Phil Jan 26, 2014 17:11:57 GMT -6 Phil likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by matonanjin on Jan 26, 2014 17:11:57 GMT -6 Really pretty. Great job.
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Minor Blues by Phil Jan 26, 2014 18:20:54 GMT -6 Phil likes this

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Post by bluesbruce on Jan 26, 2014 18:20:54 GMT -6

Wow, nice job! Thanks for sharing. Hard to offer much criticism - maybe a few of the bends sounded a little flat to me - especially the first time through. That's pretty nit-picky. Certainly a very good job overall.

Bruce

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Minor Blues by Phil Jan 27, 2014 5:17:14 GMT -6

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Jan 26, 2014 18:20:54 GMT -6 bluesbruce said:

- maybe a few of the bends sounded a little flat to me - especially the first time through. That's pretty nit-picky.

Bruce

Thanks for the input, Bruce. You're not being nit-picky - that's what I need to know. Looks like I'll have to put a little more oomph! into those bends.

Phil

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Post by Phil on Jan 25, 2014 17:57:39 GMT -6

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Post by Phil on Jan 27, 2014 5:17:14 GMT -6